This Vampire lust

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By Scarface1300

I look below and to my joy

They walk along the passage way

And even though I look amongst

They cannot see me, how I pray.


I pray for them and then for me

That I can home in for the kill

Although they die upon this eve

A less than painless death does thrill.


That really is my main concern

My thought is food rather than health

If I can relish my main course

Then this to me means more than wealth.


Simplicity almost a joke

We pass among with perfect ease

Nothing strange to worry folk

Living forever is no disease.


You may feel a strange release

A relinquishment to suns pure ray

A thirst that first you never had

A tendency to sleep all day.


The moon may cause an almost lust

You see in such fragmented view

Your mind precedes this loss of life

And unto others you shall do.


Senses perform most excellent

As Bill and Ted would truly rave

Adventure’s start is imminent

Once we arise beyond the grave.


Your favourite colour now blood red

The taste is something to behold

Consider like the finest wine

But never drink this when its cold.


And to their end they walk the line

This favor that is so rebust

To those whom once walked in the light

Will now share in this Vampire Lust.

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Nellieanna profile image

Nellieanna Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Stunning. . .

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writer20 Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

it's good to see you back here. Your poem is excellant.Voted up and awesome.

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Scarface1300 Hub Author 5 months ago

Hello Nellieanna... Stunning appraisal from a stunning lady. Thank you so much your words overwhelm me.................. Chris

writer20...Your words are music to me, Thank you and for the vote of confidence Thank you again................Chris

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

You and nighthag are the best when writing gruesome poetry. Have you read her's? If not, you should. I think you would enjoy. Thank you. I really liked this..

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Scarface1300 Hub Author 5 months ago

Hi always exploring... I have not read her work but i will be doing that very soon...I am so happy that you like my writing and it is I that should be thanking you for taking the time to read my product. best wishes............Chris

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Sueswan Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Amazing!

Voted up up and away!

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Scarface1300 Hub Author 5 months ago

Hello Sue...It is you that is Amazing...I am simply honoured as always by your most Amazing comments. Thank you

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Frank Atanacio Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

another good share :)

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Scarface1300 Hub Author 5 months ago

Hello Frank...Thanks for the comments glad you liked it

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stars439 Level 7 Commenter 4 months ago

Great writing. I like your hubs. One of my favorite movies was Blue Velvet. Scarface was neat. Love those action movies. God Bless You. I am on my way on the yellow brick road to join your fan club. Thanks for joining mine.

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Scarface1300 Hub Author 4 months ago

Hi again stars439... Once again i am overwhelmed with your generous comments, Thank you. Ps/ I did enjoy the film Blue Velvet...It was a pleasure to follow such a talented writer............Chris

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